Monday, August 15, 2011

Does My Prologue Sound Interesting?

I really like your writing style! However a prologue is supposed to grasp the reader. This prologue doesn't really have much interesting content. Maybe you should create a dramatic twist in which the workers takes and kidnaps Scarlett? I'm not sure if that would change your storyline considerably, but it's just a suggestion of mines. Other then that, good job!

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